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Showing posts with label DYM feedback. Show all posts
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Friday, 18 March 2011

DYM feedback

Hi Tom

I've been very pleased with the standard of your research HWs - you are showing good understanding of the theory and you are presenting your work very effectively. Keep up the good work.

Thursday, 3 February 2011

DYM HW feedback

Hi Tom

Most of your HW has been completed to a good standard, but not all of it. YOu might need to meet with me tomorrow lunchtime to go over what needs re-writing.

Your first HW is lacking the references to Todorov and Propp. Please look back at your class notes to help with this.

Half the NICS HW has been completed correctly, but the other half needs correcting. The section on narrative contains good analysis on some the key themes, but should also contain more about the structure of the film, and how that compares to the action-adventure genre in general. Some general advice for blogging: take care to check over your work when you have posted your work onto your blog.